Sunday 6 May 2007

hazy dawn by J D Nelson

the scent of smoke

last night,
the moon was
a sick neon pink.

the sun's been up
for almost two hours --

the bats think
it's still dawn.

red Martian sky


J D Nelson, Colorado, USA

2 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

pollution? science fiction? lunar eclipse? I like the sense of mystery here.

Mandy said...

The sights one sees and the shades of the skies never cease to shock.