Tuesday, 4 July 2006

Untitled by Phil Primeau

things don't fit together
so well

magnetism decreases

swans lift like water
but generate no electricity

come home
& put on nick drake
shower then remove the cassette

eat a bowl of cheerios
against her gravity

wait for blood
to thin bad rain

Phil Primeau is manager-in-chief of PERSISTENCIA*PRESS and editor of Dirt, a print 'zine of minimalist poetry and poetics.


Crafty Green Poet said...

I particularly like the beginning of this poem and the swans.....

Anna Piutti said...

Simply brilliant.
I agree about the swans, and I particularly love the ending.

Crafty Green Poet said...

HI Anna, interesting how the same poem can impress people differently...

Anonymous said...

Interesting pictures painted with words, an especially vivid image of swans lifting like water...

Anna Piutti said...

Juliet - it is.