Wednesday, 12 May 2010

Piebald by Chris Crittenden

gyre of swifts
tangled in dizzy swoops
of black and white,

unstable
as aerial Celtic knots,
zestful as hummingbirds
beguiled by noon.

lust elates
their little chests,
makes them weave
like gears of a magic clock

until many of them
plummet
and the rest stream away,
leaving no signature.


Chris Crittenden, Maine, USA

2 comments:

Gordon Mason said...

I'm watching swifts in volume while I'm writing this ... and taking each image from the poem and saying, yes!

Owl Who Laughs said...

Gordon,

I appreciate your generous words. Although I've been rather stoic, your comments have uplifted me in the past, thank you truly.

Chris