beautiful poetry with something to say (closed to submissions)
Delicate lines for a delicate image of life and persistance. Nicely done.
I really like how you mirrored the delicateness of the primrose with the delicate language you chose.
Beautiful a lovely lacinessto this poem.
Melanie, this is so lovely and dainty...and hopeful.
Thank you all for reading my poem.I wish I could send you all a big hug. You all are wonderful.love, Melanie-bd
Flowers like these, softenanyone's heart. Melanie writeswith a gentle pen, that givesa loving nod to Mother Nature.
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