beautiful poetry with something to say
This is a deceptively simple poem filled with action and imagery and reminders. Wonderful work!
I love the wording to describe the lawn. Good visual. And the titmouse cleansing itself after the storm reminds me that we can all do just that.
Life, in the little things. Beautiful!
Splendid poem, great choice. With a Japanese, haiku flavour in it.
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