Saturday, 23 July 2011

Thunder by Karuna Chandrashekar

We sit on swing sets,

sand in our shoes
leaves swirling by.

The sky pulses-
a storm approaches.

You hold my hand,
tight, but smile as if

in a photograph
taken by a stranger.

Karuna Chandrashekar, India


Ambiguitylotus said...

Lovely... :)

The ending leaves room for mystery. :)

Kay Middleton said...

Every poem should have a little thing to wonder about afterwards. Good job.

Nadya Avila Chant said...

Lovely as always, Karuna! :)


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CMDoran said...

There does appear to be a whole story attached...goes to show that you don't need a lot of words to write something beautiful. Thank you.