red proved the toughest contender
in the fiery battle between black and colour
he was a radical mover and shaker
a hot-blooded fighter
who waved the scarlet standard tall
for black to see and force to fall
he led all colours deep into the heated battle
memories of the long dark days
ignited their passions
which raged and flared
creating their own light
they reveled in the spilling of crimson blood
and black recoiled in horror
red rolled out the carpet for his friends
when the battle was won
power to the petite
colours
tints
of every shade
advancing into the open
a revolutionary freedom
cause for celebration
let’s paint the town.
Gabrielle Bryden, Australia
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Gabrielle Bryden is an Australian writer whose poetry has been published in Ripples, Speedpoets, and Aspects magazines; Third Eye, Lunarosity, and Specusphere webzines; in the book ‘Short and Twisted 2010 and on National ABC Radio.
and...it pushed the pallor from her cheeks before she slept...
very inspirational...thank you for writing.
Thanks Juliet and C.M. Doran
I like the rhythm of this poem and that red is the color fighting against black instead of white.
Lovely Poem.... Thank you for sharing.
Veritas
My daughter is home for Christmas and we did our annual Lord of the Rings fest so I have the imagery of the battle of the Pelinor field and Theodin's "red dawn" speech to go with your text. Red against black. Nicely done, this.
Thanks Poet Hound, Veritas (I see you copied it to your website!) and Mairu (glad you put it to good use - haha - lovely).
'Power to the petite.'
Power to the poet.
One of your best, Gabrielle and congratulations on being featured!
Haha - thanks Selma 'poet' 'people','petite'!
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