Tuesday, 2 October 2007

haiku by J D Nelson

after the shower --
just a few scattered blackbirds,
a low-flying hawk


J D Nelson, Colorado, USA

2 comments:

Tina Trivett said...

Simple, cool & lovely...can almost imagine a mist in the air.

Bob said...

lovely poem...several emotions are evoked beautifully in these few lines....bravo!