tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29947933.post4032753741624728849..comments2023-09-29T09:27:20.666+00:00Comments on Bolts of Silk: Dependent by Chris MajorCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29947933.post-29200169873534390952007-05-29T07:31:00.000+00:002007-05-29T07:31:00.000+00:00I have liked this one so much that I have clicked ...I have liked this one so much that I have clicked on the side link to read all his poems published in Bolts of Silk so far. I notice that they are all equally strong, and if you don't mind me saying this, equally weakened by the final ellipsis, as if Chris wasn't sure of the approppriateness of his poem's endings. <BR/><BR/>I think that all of them except this one would improve a lot with a final full stop, indicating that whatever action has ended. In this one the ellipsis seems right as the poor boy's life is so uncertain.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29947933.post-78723508148349948872007-05-01T15:21:00.000+00:002007-05-01T15:21:00.000+00:00Well done, and well said.Well done, and well said.Patrizzi Intergarlicticahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16047084173908563600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29947933.post-15989360273147470872007-04-23T17:07:00.000+00:002007-04-23T17:07:00.000+00:00Wow powerful and sad!Peace GigglesWow powerful and sad!<BR/><BR/>Peace GigglesGiggleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11713143985984314202noreply@blogger.com