tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29947933.post2418842992540380858..comments2023-09-29T09:27:20.666+00:00Comments on Bolts of Silk: Universe by Neil EllmanCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29947933.post-16256481553422051002010-11-02T15:27:49.457+00:002010-11-02T15:27:49.457+00:00Love the many ways the poem works- as a scientific...Love the many ways the poem works- as a scientific reflection, comment on change, and feeling of utter loneliness.Cynthia Pittmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12656761837022197235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-29947933.post-59115220359098313412009-09-11T23:47:03.189+00:002009-09-11T23:47:03.189+00:00I appreciate the form of each stanza that curves b...I appreciate the form of each stanza that curves back into itself, mimicking the message. The repetition of words and the contradictions enhance the whole.<br /><br />I really love the second stanza, but the ending is stunning.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.com