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Monday, 28 February 2011

watching by Joanna Lee

herons stalk the edge of
civilization; the river
sings a marbled song
of fire and forgotten glory while
the sun casts about the rapids; geese
fish from the shallows, men
from the bridge. stones bake;
clouds come and go
like the old women searching
the banks for change and lost
youth while a train slows
with its mourner's whistle and i
lean on the edge of
wildness, watching.


Joanna Lee, VA, USA

4 comments:

  1. I Loved this. Especially, "...like the old women searching
    the banks for change and lost
    youth..."

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  2. I liked the part Martin liked too; it was all lovely, but the "marbled song of fire and forgotten glory" sang to me most.

    Crafty Green Poet--you really have either an eye or ear [or both] for lovely imagery--great choices you make for this site.

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  3. Liked the images here, particularly "like the old women searching the banks for change" and the train whistle.

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  4. Rachana7:49 pm

    loved it ...same the part that martin liked :)kp it up ...

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